RAIN- a poem by Carter Makice

I feel free.

I am no longer

held by the

Shining bars of

Sunlight.

Shine, Gleam, Shine,

In the Rain’s

Soft Pattering Kisses.

Kiss, Patter, Kiss.

In the Rain,

I Feel Free.

Posted on Monday, May 25th, 2009 at 9:55 pm in the category:Uncategorized. Comment RSS 2.0 feed. Comment it , or trackback this post.

5 Responses to “RAIN- a poem by Carter Makice”

  1. Ben Fulton says:
    May 25th, 2009 at 11:04 pm

    Lovely!

  2. Grammy says:
    May 29th, 2009 at 10:11 am

    This is a beautiful poem, Carter. Raindrops DO feel like kisses when the rain is soft. Maybe you can write a new poem about a thunderstorm. Keep writing.

  3. Jordan Thevenow-Harrison says:
    May 31st, 2009 at 3:20 pm

    This is better than most of the poetry I saw in college.

  4. TeresaR says:
    May 31st, 2009 at 3:58 pm

    Stunning…really! You should get that published.

  5. Julie hammond says:
    July 30th, 2009 at 9:21 pm

    I love your poem Carter :)

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